Friday 6 November 2020

Rutva's Onomatopoeia poem

 The sun beaming onto the sand making it very hot 


Waves bashing into the shore washing up seaweed


Ice cream dripping onto my hand making it sticky


The tweet of birds filing the air with sound

 


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5 comments:

  1. Phil @ Ako Hiko6 November 2020 at 13:53

    Kia ora Rutva. I love poems and onomatopoeia so this was a great post for me. Did you take part in the Ako Hiko poetry slam? Maybe an image would go nicely with your poem?

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    1. Anonymous12 November 2020 at 10:35

      Hi. Phil. Thank you for commenting on my blog. No I haven't taking part in the Ako Hiko poetry slam.
      Shall I do more poem's🤔🤔🤔?
      Blog ya later
      Rutva

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    2. Phil @ Ako Hiko12 November 2020 at 11:40

      I think you should do more poems for sure. But only if you want to! Check out the poetry slam site if you want some ideas. Poetry Slam

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  2. Anonymous9 November 2020 at 09:36

    Hi Rutva, thank you for posting on your blog. I like your poem because it has a lot of descriptive word in it. I have not done a Onomatopoeia poem yet. Blog you later.

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    1. Anonymous10 November 2020 at 10:36

      Hi. Salamasina. Thank you for commenting on my blog.
      I will do more good poem's in the future
      Blog ya later
      Rutva

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