Their mission to mars had been a success so far. A month ago their shuttle had landed on the surface of the red planet and the crew had immediately set to work.
The astronaut wore a suit. It was very uncomfortable stuffy and warm.
The astronaut roamed on the crust of mars
Hi Rutva
ReplyDeleteWell done with all of you writing you are doing using the writing prompts.
Great work with your sick sentences Rutva. I like that you are using more descriptive words to add impact to your sentences. Next you could try and change the beginning of your sentences to verbs or adverbs to make them more interesting. Keep up the great work.
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DeleteOkay I will try to put verbs and adverbs in my story next time
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Rutva
Hello Rutva. Poppy here and i am from Room 25. Great job on your 5th writing prompt! I like how you used lots of describing words. What has been your favourite writing prompt so far?
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Poppy.