(1) tell: Bobby was shocked.
Show: bobby did the biggest gasp and is eyes widened
(2) tell: Jimmy was excited.
Show: jimmy was high pitched screaming of excitement
(3) tell: Timmy was sad.
Show: timmy was swimming in his own tears.
(4) tell: Jamey was mad
Show: Jamey was so furious that his face went red
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