The ground began to shake. Birds sprang from the branches of the trees in the state of panic as the huge figure crawled out of the earth. The great big colossal giant opened his great big mouth and let out a great scream.His massive big head was deep stone grey color he was really big and Furious
By Rutva
Thanks again for sharing your writing Rutva. In class we have been working on changing the first word of our sentences to adverbs or verbs to make them more interesting. The sentence 'The great big colossal giant opened his great big mouth and let out a massive scream' could be 'screaming, the great big colossal giant opened his great big mouth' (I like the word colossal by the way!). Keep up the great work.
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