Kia ora Rutva, great story. I like how it moved quickly to keep the excitement up. It reminds me of getting the train in England when I used to live there. Luckily I never had to climb on the roof! Maybe you could write a part two? Why is your dad in space? I'd love to see what happens next!
Kia ora Rutva. Goodness this story took me on a wild ride! There were lots of twists and developments that were unexpected. If you were to continue with the story it would be great if you could answer some of the mysterious things that happened because as a reader I am left wondering 'how?'. Keep up the great work Rutva.
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Kia ora Rutva, great story. I like how it moved quickly to keep the excitement up. It reminds me of getting the train in England when I used to live there. Luckily I never had to climb on the roof! Maybe you could write a part two? Why is your dad in space? I'd love to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Rutva. Goodness this story took me on a wild ride! There were lots of twists and developments that were unexpected. If you were to continue with the story it would be great if you could answer some of the mysterious things that happened because as a reader I am left wondering 'how?'. Keep up the great work Rutva.
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