Rutva you have used some great vocabulary like 'awaken' and 'ancient' and 'roared'. I could imagine the boy and the bird. Well done using speech marks in your writing.
Kia ora Rutva. Thanks for sharing your story on your blog for us to read. You have started to build some great visual imagery for the reader by adding in detail and description. I wonder if you could add in some mishaps and adventures that happened to him on the island before he got sent home? Keep up the great work.
Rutva you have used some great vocabulary like 'awaken' and 'ancient' and 'roared'. I could imagine the boy and the bird. Well done using speech marks in your writing.
ReplyDeleteKa pai Rutva , I would be interested in knowing his journey/ adventure back home. 👍
ReplyDeleteKia ora Rutva. Thanks for sharing your story on your blog for us to read. You have started to build some great visual imagery for the reader by adding in detail and description. I wonder if you could add in some mishaps and adventures that happened to him on the island before he got sent home? Keep up the great work.
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