Tuesday, 25 June 2019

stranded (Not finished)



We finally got to the island After a few hours of travelling. We all glazed at the beautiful island.
We saw the trees and the beach swaying in the summer breeze. 
We sat on the beach glazing at the beautiful summer sky.  
ADVERB SENTENCES

  1. The children wrote on the smooth sand what a stick we will stay here forever
  2. She walked along the rocks looking for treasures from the sea then after a few minutes she found lot’s of  diamonds, ruby's and emeralds
There was a family on  vacation.At the end of the day they all said “this is  very fun vacation we should do it again sometime.''.2 Once there was a family stranded on island and the mum said “ If we are stranded here we must find a way to survive”.3 Once a family on a cruise ship... (to be continued)

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous2 July 2019 at 09:07

    wow Rutva thats very good

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    1. Anonymous4 July 2019 at 12:17

      Hi Rory. Thanks for your comment. A challenge that I faced when completing this task was thinking of ideas to write. Have you tried this before?. blog you later, Rutva

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  2. Anonymous23 July 2019 at 10:12

    Hey Rutva! I liked your Stranded. Have you thought about checking your writing because there was a LOT of grammar mistakes. e.g. You wrote "The children wrote on the smooth sand what a stick we will stay here forever" but I think you meant "The children wrote on the smooth sand with a stick, 'we will stay here forever'"
    Blogging out,
    Lillia

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